words in BOLD print is my emphasis
lack of confidence rather lack of confident
not to the extent (noun) of helping them rather than not to the extend (verb) of helping them
not to criticise one another (2 or more parties) rather than not to criticise each other (2 persons or 2 parties)
Are you sure you want to be correcting other people's grammar mistakes?
There is nothing wrong in the mistakes that you have pointed out in myfoot123's posts. But:
instead of "words in BOLD print is my emphasis" it is "emphasis is mine" or - since everybody can see the original why bother mentioning this.
Lack of confidence rather THAN lack of confident.
And other mistakes that you have missed out:
"Thus GRC swing voters were sitting along the fence whether or not to vote for opposition due to skepticism or lack of confident resulted in wide GRC margin disparity against the ruling party. " should be rewritten as:
"Thus swing voters in GRCs were undecided as to whether to vote for opposition, due to skepticism or lack of confidence in them. This resulted in a wide margin of loss against the ruling party (in the GRCs)." because:
1. it is "sitting on the fence" not "sitting along the fence".
2. you only use "sitting on the fence" when you are ending the sentence with it. Technically you cannot be "sitting on the fence" while voting because that would mean you are spoiling your vote. What he really means is that those people who were swing voters voted for the PAP, not the opposition.
3. "disparity in numbers" means numbers that ought to be the same are very different. What he should have said is that the margin of victory for the PAP is wider. Disparity and margin are not the same thing.
Without further comment, the rest of this post should read:
"In the SMCs, the margin of loss for the opposition was smaller. While still skeptical about the opposition, people believed that the opposition could manage a small town.
During the 2016 election, it will be a different scenario, more favourable towards the opposition parties. By then, WP would have proven that opposition parties can manage a GRC independently. This would give swing voters more confidence than in 2011.
Png Eng Huat last PE rally also gave assurances to other opposition parties with regards to managing GRCs. He hinted that WP will always place public interests above party interests. Thus, should any other opposition win a GRC, I believe WP will pass them the know-how or even help them out in setting up systems to run non-PAP town councils, although not to the extent of helping them actually manage the town. Thus, oppostion unity may be manifested mainly at operations and administrative level. Such would be the gentlemanly opposition unity I hope to see, rather than as the consolidation of previously separate parties.
My point is, opposition parties should not engage in multi-corner fights with more than three contestants. They should not to criticise each other at the rally but rather focus on diluting PAP power. If other opposition parties win, WP will not begrudge them but may instead even share operational knowledge with them.
KJ was not very wise for criticising WP at the PE rally. Someday he may need WP knowledge to run his town when PAP decides to terminate the systems with only one month's notice."
If you read closely I have corrected way more than 20 grammar mistakes. People are always getting their grammar wrong in this forum but I don't care, I don't go around correcting people so long as I get the point.