what is the moral of this short movie story?

[Franjipani]

i ran out of juice already. need to eat some instant noodles to perk up. continue my daydreaming later....

 

[ODACHEK]

however, as time goes by, jenny discovered that tan had a secret that he was hiding from her.

several times when the two of them were together, tan's phone would ring. he always made excuses to avoid answering the phone, saying that they were some scam calls. other times, tan would excuse himself and take the calls away from jenny's listening ear.

one day, jenny couldn't help but asked tan: "what's going on with you? are you hiding something from me?" tan replied: "it's nothing. It's just some office matters".

however jenny wasn't a fool. she didn't believed all those explanation by tan. a few days later, jenny unlocked tan's phone because she had previously observed tan's pasacode. tan was taking a shower and jenny saw a message: “老公今天早点回来“.

jenny was in a shock.

why is her boyfriend a married man! jenny used her own mobile phone to secretly take a screenshot of the mobile phone number from which the message was sent.

after tan had left her home, jenny dialed the mobile phone number and as soon as her call was picked up, she screamed and warned the other party that she was tan's girlfriend and asked her not to pester tan.

what jenny didn't expect was that the other party suddenly became furious and retorted:

"你说什么? are you his girlfriend? do you know who I am? my name is michelle, and i am tan's real wife! i have heard tan telling me about you. you better stop pestering him. Why do you, a fucking old slut want him? we are married for several years, and there is no way he would choose you over me!"

after being scolded, jenny felt ashamed and angry. it really turned out that tan had been deceiving her! he obviously already had a wife, but he still pretended to be unmarried in front of her and had deceived her all along. it was really unbecoming! thinking of this the whole night, the next day jenny called tan and asked him to come over to her home.

when tan arrived, he learned the truth and said with a smile: "姐, think about the time we have been together, you really can't feel my love? 是的, i am married, but i also have the right to pursue 爱情. what's more, my marriage to her is just a piece of paper to jointly purchase an hdb executive condominium, with no feelings at all, and I have been looking for a chance to escape. can you give me some time?"

tan spoke so sincerely and jenny felt touched despite being angry. though jenny felt much better after scolding him, she still broke up with tan and the two stopped contacting each other....

 

[LexLuthor]

Fwah why all these single virgins stay in condo and not hdb one?
Also where are all their parents?

The fake one divorced virgin also stays in condo. Stay in HDB how to hook men ? Men are attracted to rich women who are single, virgin, cultured enough to play the piano, with a heart for charity.

 

[Franjipani]

walao, u really want jenny to suffer is it? if jenny goes back, i think it will be a sad ending leh...ok ok I try. i will reconcile them instead of Jenny going for another better man

 

[Franjipani]

part 5

a week later, jenny couldn't bear the pain of lovesickness. it was after all her first and only relationship in her entire life. she had also surrendered her precious virginity to a man she really really loved.

couldn't bear the pain, she took the initiative to call tan and said that she didn't want to lose tan and hoped that the two could reconcile.

tan also had the idea of divorcing michelle and marrying jenny. the two then decided to cherish each other once more and rekindled their love story again.

soon after, tan went home. he proposed divorce to michelle, but the unwilling michelle refused to divorce, and the two had a big fight.

actually tan and michelle had never been on good terms after a few years of marriage. michelle knew that her husband was having an affair with jenny, but she still refused to divorce him. michelle's logic was that she is younger and prettier than that old slutty malaysian jenny from ipoh, so why should she back out.

as time went by, the 新鲜感 and 快乐 between tan and jenny disappeared, and they also slowly discovered each other's shortcomings.

tan also started to think that falling in love with an older woman would make him embarrassed if and when he finally marries jenny.

he gradually began to withdraw himself from jenny. however, before tan could propose a break up, jenny became pregnant from their frequently unprotected intimate moments...

 

[ODACHEK]

a week later, jenny couldn't bear the pain of lovesickness. it was after all her first and only relationship in her entire life. she had also surrendered her precious virginity to a man she really really loved.

couldn't bear the pain, she took the initiative to call tan and said that she didn't want to lose tan and hoped that the two could reconcile.

tan also had the idea of divorcing michelle and marrying jenny. the two then decided to cherish each other once more and rekindled their love story again.

soon after, tan went home. he proposed divorce to michelle, but the unwilling michelle refused to divorce, and the two had a big fight.

actually tan and michelle had never been on good terms after a few years of marriage. michelle knew that her husband was having an affair with jenny, but she still refused to divorce him. michelle's logic was that she is younger and prettier than that old slutty malaysian jenny from ipoh, so why should she back out.

as time went by, the 新鲜感 and 快乐 between tan and jenny disappeared, and they also slowly discovered each other's shortcomings.

tan also started to think that falling in love with an older woman would make him embarrassed if and when he finally marries jenny.

he gradually began to withdraw himself from jenny. however, before tan could propose a break up, jenny became pregnant from their frequently unprotected intimate moments...

 

[Franjipani]

part 6

that night, jenny was so happy that she specially cooked lots of delicious dishes at home. she called tan to come over to her place for dinner. when tan learned of her pregnancy news, he wasn't at all happy. his face was filled with helplessness and he said to jenny: "we are not married yet. how can you give birth to a child?"

hearing what tan said, jenny was very unhappy and said, "it's simple. i'm already pregnant. the baby is yours and you should hurry up and divorce that horrible wife of yours now. you don't love her anyway."

however, tan growled irritably: "divorce! divorce! divorce! is divorce so simple? if it were so easy, i would have divorced her long ago! you go and abort the baby as soon as possible. we are still young. let's have children after we get married.”

jenny became very emo and upset. she flipped the dining table over, smashing all those plates of delicious food she had made to the ground and screamed at tan: "even if you don't want this child, i want! If you don't raise the child, I will raise my own child!". after saying this, she angrily walked into her bedroom and locked herself in there.

tan sat in the living room and stared at the mess that jemny had done. after a long time, he didn't hear any movement in jenny's bedroom, so he knocked on the door and asked jenny to open the door. he didn't get any response. tan was afraid, so he kicked the door open and found jenny unconscious, and there was an empty bottle of sleeping pills next to her. he immediately call 995 and jenny was sent unconscious to the singapore general hospital. jenny survived, but her baby didn't and had to be surgically aborted.

not long after jenny had her abortion surgery, she heard that tan's wife was 8 months pregnant.

michelle was finally pregnant and was going to give birth to tan's child.

jenny was disappointed with tan. this man who kept saying that he loved her all this whilr had intimate moments with his estranged wife! how could tan do that when he always said he doesn't love michelle.

despite being extremely heartbroken, jenny never thought about leaving tan. instead, she wanted to have a good chance to get pregnant and give birth to a child again.

jenny reckoned the solution to her happiness with tan is that she must have tan's child to tie down tan's heart to herself exclusively...

 

[Franjipani]

part 7

tan had an alumni gathering and he brought jenny along.

during the alumni gathering, tan's chiobu ex classmate who was his ex girlfriend during school days saw tan and jokingly said to him: "wow, you're still so handsome? I really regret not marrying you. how about we have a drink one day?".

jenny overheard their conversation. as soon as tan went off to chat with others, jenny went to tan's ex girlfriend and reprimanded her: "who are you? why do you want to have a drink with him? i am his wife! stay away from him!"

tan's ex girlfriend was confused and confided with tan. tan on learning about the altercation was extremely upset and angry with jenny.

jenny had been a pain for tan these recent months and was damn bloody sticky to him. whenever there was a chance, she would let people around tan know about their relationship.

one weekend, tan got so drunk and he slept over at jenny's home. looking at the miserable tan, jenny felt soft again. she recalled how tan had taken care of her when they were first together, from the loaf of gardenia bread to surrendering her virginity to him.

the more she thought about it, the more distressed she became. she secretly made up her mind not to torture tan anymore, and resolve to willingly follow him for the rest of her life.

jenny felt much more at peace and began to treat tan twice as well. however, by now, tan's emotional balance has tilted in favour of michelle, his lawful wife.

tan and michelle had sort of slowly patched up and tan was happy watching michelle's belly getting bigger and bigger. tan also felt very guilty. he thought of his relationship entanglement with jenny.

tan finally decided enough was enough. he was now determined to break up with jenny completely and return to michelle.

 

[Franjipani]

part 8

on february 14 valentine's day, jenny demanded to spend 情人节 with tan, hoping that the two could have a good talk to improve their already subsiding love affair.

she threatened tan that if he didn't spend valentine's day with her, he would regret it.

tan had no choice but to reluctantly agree. he had also hoped that he can have a good talk with jenny and part ways with her easily without getting entangled with each other anymore.

jenny made a sumptuous dinner that night and opened two bottles of red wine. the two sat on the sofa chatting.

although tan was with jenny on the valentine's day, jenny still felt that tan was emotionally far away from her. she couldn't help but felt sad and depressed on why is it so difficult to stay with tan, the only one that she want to love forever.

jennt burst into tears and cried. she begged tan: "I really want to stay with you like this every day until the end of the world, but why don't you give me a chance?"

tan comforted jenny and said, "姐, I really love you, and I want to spend the rest of my life with you, but now I have to be responsible for my legally married wife. after all, she is about to give birth to my child."

jenny replied in an upset tone: "I don't ask for anything now, I just ask that you love me forever, and I love you forever, as long as we live. I will never ever ask you again to only love me and divorce your wife like before, okay? if you can't do it, then I will leave singapore from now on, disappear from your side forever, and make you suffer for the rest of your life!"

before tan answered, his mobile phone rang. his wife michelle called him and asked him to go back home.

after hanging up the phone, tan was anxious to go back to his pregnant wife. jenny was very distraught and she suddenly said: "the meal we ate tonight is too heaty, let’s have some fresh apple juice before you go.”

after saying that, jenny got up and went to the kitchen to prepare a glass of fresh apple juice, taking the opportunity to crush a few sleeping pills and putting them into the apple juice.

after tan had finished drinking, jenny hugged him tightly and refused to let him leave.

tan started to feel drowsy and fell asleep within 10 minutes or so.

jemny took out tan's mobile phone from his pocket, found michelle's number and dialed it. she asked michelle to come to her home to celebrate the valentine's day together with tan and herself!!!

although michelle had long known that her husband was having an affair with jenny, she thought that her husband would break up with jenny when he was about to become a father. now that her love rival openly called her, she became extremely angry that she went to jenny's home with her pregnant belly.

 

[The Crow]

Story script failed. Go watch more of 杜琪峰 movies ...

 

[Franjipani]

part 9

It was already past midnight when michelle arrived at jenny's home.

after jenny let her in, michelle barged into the jenny's bedroom. she saw tan, her husband sleeping naked on jenny's bed.she was furious.

michelle rushed forward to beat tan with her bare hands.

jenny really loved tan a lot. when she saw michelle beating tan, she felt heartbroken. jenny rushed over to protect tan.

michelle glared at her angrily and shouted: "i'm beating my husband, what right do you have to interfere in our husband and wife relationship? 你不要脸的Jiuhu狐狸精!"

jenny was not to be outdone screamed at Michelle: "is he your man? you don't love him anymore, and he doesn't love you either. why do you say he is your man? why do you hit him? i don't allow you to hit him!"

after saying that, jenny and michelle started shoving each other.

michelle screamed and pointed at her pregnant belly and said, "i already have my husband child. my husband's heart is with me and our child. you better stop 纠缠 my husband. you 贱货不要脸的女人!"

when jenny heard michelle mentioned the child, she became even more angry.

remembering that after she became pregnant, tan tried every means to get her to abort the child.

the more jenny thought about it, the angrier she became.

jenny picked up her lap top from her coffee table and starting smashing michelle's head and stomach repeatedly till michelle fell to the ground and started to scream in pain for help.

michelle's screams woke up tan. tan struggled to open his eyes and saw michelle and jenny fighting in the living room. jenny still had her laptop in her hands, and michelle's was bleeding as blood had soaked her maternity dress.

tan was shocked and got up and tried his best to grab jenny away from michelle.

jenny also became frightened when she saw the blood on michelle's dress. she stood there dumbfounded.

tan quickly called 995 and rushed michelle to singapore general hospital.

at sgh a&e. the lady doctor told tan that michelle's uterus was perforated and the fetus had asphyxiated inside the body. the baby was gone.

jenny who was still at home felt regretful for her actions. she recalled her relationship with tan and finally realised that she no longer had the same enthusiasm as before. The past scenes had broken her heart into a million pieces.

 

[Franjipani]

Story script failed. Go watch more of 杜琪峰 movies ...

i am just daydreaming and not a professional writer lah..

 

[Franjipani]

part 10

jenny resigned from her job in singapore and went back to ipoh to stay with her parents and never came back ever again.

sources from the grapevine revealed that she had developed mild schizophrenia after all that had happened.

she started hearing strange sounds like knocks and men whistling at her when there aren't in reality.

she had also gone for a hymen reconstruction procedure and proudly declared to be a 处女 all over again. in short, she became a siaotingtong.

michelle finally decided enough is enough and divorced tan. she got more than 80% share in combined assets and now is staying with her good friend who is taking care of her very well.

 

[Franjipani]

what is the moral of this short movie story written by me?​

i would greatly appreciate your comments.

 

[Hightech88]

what is the moral of this short movie story written by me?​

i would greatly appreciate your comments.

Moral of the story is.. this is men's forum and not a monastery.

All romance without action is very boring... knn at least must have such action sequences mah...with juices flowing...more thrilling.

 

[LexLuthor]

what is the moral of this short movie story written by me?​

i would greatly appreciate your comments.

The names of the characters failed by time lah.

The name "Jenny" KNN like Ah Soh names in the 80s. You should have called her "Jean", sounds more chio.

Then Tan ? Every Tom, Dick and Harry is a Tan these days, you expect us to visual a Tan as someone handsome ? No creativity. At least give him one of those 3-part name mah, such as Kenji Takashi Latha, in short, KT Latha.

 

[Franjipani]

The names of the characters failed by time lah.

The name "Jenny" KNN like Ah Soh names in the 80s. You should have called her "Jean", sounds more chio.

Then Tan ? Every Tom, Dick and Harry is a Tan these days, you expect us to visual a Tan as someone handsome ? No creativity. At least give him one of those 3-part name mah, such as Kenji Takashi Latha, in short, KT Latha.

thanks. i will improve on these pointers you suggested next time

 

[ODACHEK]

what is the moral of this short movie story written by me?​

i would greatly appreciate your comments.

I skipped part 7 and so on ..getting boring.

 

[Franjipani]

I skipped part 7 and so on ..getting boring.

thanks for your honesty. very much appreciated.