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Come to my office.
To be continued ....
To be continued ....
welcome back, bro! looks like the big boys are back and this will help this forum head north.
Thanks GD, I was busy with work.
Thank bro.Your imagination is wunderfool
Are you writing at the sister forum too?
no worries. we understand. leongsam spoke highly of you. i m jealous. will drown myself with vinegar, from sheng siong.
Your imagination is wunderfool
Are you writing at the sister forum too?
Sure or not? Messy plot and so long-winded, read until can fall asleep. Worse than Claire's writing. Totally cannot make it
But in life, when you want to do something, just give it a go and do it.
Thanks. Never dare to say I am a good writer.
But in life, when you want to do something, just give it a go and do it.
Of course. I am sure that's other people's mantra too like give early retirement a go and what mean thing you said then? Cast aspersions of people having sugar daddy. At least my review of your writing is objective, it is truly messy plot with bland and long-winded writing. Same for my highlight of you being a plagiariser thief. All got evidence got talk.
NG Shots
The Scheme Act 1 Scene 1 :
"Boss , I heard something…" He whispered softly.
"Ni Gong Simi ?", the boss demanded.
He cleared his throat , leaned toward his ear and said “BOSSSS ! He is into it."
Wow Pian! Your saliva all over my ear!
CUT!
"Serious ?! Can you confirm it ?" The boss rubbed his hands with glee.
"I'll have a PI on the case. Will get you the evidence asap."
" Go get it ! " He barked at him.
Leaning back on his leather chair, he slowly revealed a devilish grin. Oooops !…. ( The chair collapsed backwards. )
CUT!
hey derfatfugs, trying to gain sympathy and elicit an apology?There is much room for improvement. As a start, an apology for smearing others and casting aspersions with false statements like sugar daddy. Or is it an entitlement for mudland trash to smear others by spamming lies?