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Bitter Virgin a good Manga story

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Bitter Virgin (Japanese: ビター バージン, Hepburn: Bitā Bājin) is a seinen manga presented by Kei Kusunoki and serialized in Young Gangan. Prior to producing this manga, Kusunoki had stopped writing for a period in order to cope with a miscarriage.

ビター バージン
(Bitā Bājin)
Bitter Virgin

Cover of the fourth volume of Bitter Virgin as published by Square Enix
Manga
Written byKei Kusunoki
Published bySquare Enix
MagazineYoung Gangan
DemographicSeinen
Original runFebruary 18, 2005 – March 7, 2008
Volumes4

Bitter Virgin is the story of high school student Daisuke Suwa and his classmate, a girl named Hinako Aikawa, as well as the relationship that develops between them soon after Daisuke discovers a tragic – and very personal – secret that Hinako has been forced to bear on her own.

Plot​


Daisuke Suwa is a high school student living with his widowed mother in a small Japanese community. His ambitions are to leave the town, gain acceptance at a city university, and enjoy being a bachelor.

In a discussion with a classmate about which of the girls in class he would choose to date, he declares he would pass on only one: Hinako Aikawa, a beautiful but shy girl. Daisuke is put off by her "sweet virgin" act and is annoyed by her extreme reactions to physical contact with men.

Working after school one day, Daisuke takes refuge in an empty church building to avoid a pair of girls, hiding inside a confessional booth. Believing him to be a priest, Hinako asks him to hear her confession.

As a junior high school student, Hinako was sexually abused by her stepfather and became pregnant. Her mother learned of the pregnancy when Hinako miscarried, but did nothing. The abuse continued and Hinako became pregnant again. She was told that the pregnancy may make her incapable of bearing children again, but since the doctors felt an abortion at that point would be dangerous, she carried the baby to term and her mother had it put up for adoption immediately after birth.

Hinako ends by saying that although she never wanted the child and was relieved to have it adopted, she wonders whether it would be all right if she celebrated his birthday, which is today. Daisuke assures her that she has the support of God, which calms Hinako down, she thanks him and leaves.

The next day a baby carriage begins to roll down. Daisuke instinctively jumps to protect Hinako and manages to stop the carriage, both of them are knocked to the ground. In the process, Hinako's skirt gets hitched up, revealing a scar on her stomach which Daisuke recognizes as a Caesarean-section scar. Daisuke realizes that her ordeal was the cause of her aversion to men. He resolves to keep her secret and soon finds himself falling in love with her.
 

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Bitter Virgina review by Laniaka

When I first read this manga many years ago I enjoyed it so much that I reread it again immediately afterwards. But there was something about it that made it hard for me to consider it a favourite even though I liked it so much. Now that I read it again after many years I still see the appeal. The manga has some amazing pacing for a romance manga: All the chapters feel relevant to the story yet it is not rushed. Sadly the manga does have many flaws.

The story starts with Daisuke saying that he is not interested in our heroine Aikawa because of how she shirks away from men. Maybe this is where the title comes into play? She acts bitter towards men even though she is a virgin. Or that is what Daisuke assumes. Soon he finds out that she was a victim of sexual abuse for years and has given birth to a child, which has been given up for adoption. He cannot believe it at first but gradually accepts the facts and falls in love with her. She on her part lets him get close because she believes what he said when he proclaimed he was not interested in her. And of course she gradually develops feelings as well.

This heavy setting helps the manga avoid some of the typical romance manga cliches. For example there is no need for the usual forced indecision and misunderstandings since there is a perfectly good and natural reason why the main characters don't instantly get together.

There are two very typical cliche characters in the form of the bitchy jealous girl and the childhood friend. However the way these two characters act properly embraces these traits. The childhood friend really acts like she knows that Daisuke is not interested in her and the bitchy girl is really forcing herself onto Daisuke. Which is partially his fault since he is an idiot and he leads her on at first.
All of the characters besides Aikawa are a bit mean in some way while still being nice overall. This is great because it makes them feel more real. However they still lack any kind of depth. And the manga does not handle this meanness in a meaningful way. Whenever a character does or says something mean it is ignored or forgiven instantly.

A jarring example of this is the moment where Aikawa tells one of the other characters that she has given birth to the child of her stepfather. This character then says that this makes them jealous of Aikawa... I mean... Really??? There is a reason for the character feeling this way but this reason is not enough by any means. I could accept this if it was just this character not thinking things through and saying it out of frustration. But Aikawa does not protest at all. And even worse, the manga itself doesn't do anything to show that it is not ok to say this. At least when there was a false rape accusation one of the characters thought this was not ok, even though all the others were apparently fine with it...

The ending of the manga is also really bad because it completely focuses on their feelings of not feeling good enough for each other. This overemphasis kills most of the feeling of reward the reader would normally feel for them finally getting together.

The lack of exploration of the topic and the shallow characters prevent the story from becoming anything special. However it could still have been an entertaining read due to the great pacing and because of how the characters are realistic in some aspects. But sadly the aforementioned lack of consequences really ruins it.
 
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